I need the current literature report edited, as there were sections within the report that were not answered fully. 

Topic: A Comparative Analysis of Christian and Hindu Parents’ Perspectives on Outdoor Nature Play in Early Childhood (file attached)

I need the following sections to be corrected, please, however, if you find you can make it read and write bettter please assist.

Introduction: Needs to add references within this paragraph

Literature Review: Needs to be condensed and concise - following marking criteria (attached)

Question 1: This section needs to have a table or figure - which needs to be explained. Please look at the exemplair attached. This paragraph should say, " Table 1.... " and Participants 1, 2, 3 etc describing what these participants had in common or what was the trend between them all 

-Also if you can make the table or figure a bit more interesting- needs to be APA 7 table- link attached in the Assessment 2 document.

***Overal I need to reduce the report to 2500 words.